Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Chapter 15

2018-11-14

A not-so-exciting chapter is filled with foreshadowing and Jeff forces his wife to read half of it

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 27.84MB - Duration: 1:00:36 m (64 kbps 44100 Hz)




Chapter 14

2018-11-06

Erin explains what a car is to a "world of magic" native, and Jeff explains how to use big words

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 16.12MB - Duration: 36:00 m (63 kbps 44100 Hz)




Chapter 13

2018-10-30

Our heroes visit a friend for magical pancakes and Jeff brags about the inventive names he comes up with

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 23.78MB - Duration: 53:12 m (62 kbps 44100 Hz)




Chapter 12

2018-10-23

Margaux bribes birds with berries and Jeff has repeated trouble with alliteration

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 25.76MB - Duration: 57:52 m (62 kbps 44100 Hz)




Chapter 11

2018-10-16

Erin finds the traitor and Jeff explains how "Pause" works

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 16.33MB - Duration: 36:18 m (63 kbps 44100 Hz)




Chapter 10

2018-10-10

An exciting chapter finds our heroes battling evil and eating fresh turkey

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 23.23MB - Duration: 51:42 m (63 kbps 44100 Hz)




Chapter 9

2018-10-02

Two main characters almost kiss and Jeff whines about being stuffy

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 15.02MB - Duration: 32:53 m (64 kbps 44100 Hz)




Chapter 8

2018-09-26

Margaux cries after trying on shoes, and Jeff creates more dead air than ever before

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 15.82MB - Duration: 35:29 m (62 kbps 44100 Hz)




Chapter 7

2018-09-19

A crazy-long episode where our heroes escape bad guys with help from a new main character and Jeff raves about cheap beer

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 18.64MB - Duration: 42:29 m (61 kbps 44100 Hz)




Chapter 6

2018-09-11

A favorite chapter that sees our hero slapped in the face in the presence of countless typos.

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Filetype: MP3 - Size: 15.57MB - Duration: 34:47 m (63 kbps 44100 Hz)




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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!


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