Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!
Erin explains what a car is to a "world of magic" native, and Jeff explains how to use big words
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Our heroes visit a friend for magical pancakes and Jeff brags about the inventive names he comes up with
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Margaux bribes birds with berries and Jeff has repeated trouble with alliteration
Filetype: MP3 - Size: 25.76MB - Duration: 57:52 m (62 kbps 44100 Hz)
Erin finds the traitor and Jeff explains how "Pause" works
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An exciting chapter finds our heroes battling evil and eating fresh turkey
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Margaux cries after trying on shoes, and Jeff creates more dead air than ever before
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A favorite chapter that sees our hero slapped in the face in the presence of countless typos.
Filetype: MP3 - Size: 15.57MB - Duration: 34:47 m (63 kbps 44100 Hz)
Want to follow along?
Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:
Don't worry! All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!