Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 29


I read through the last chapter of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month. Margaux gets a surprise promotion now that so many peers are inferred to be captured in some sort of trap that was vaguely mentioned three chapters ago. Henry gets called to a meeting, interrupting a scene that certainly wasn't what it appeared to be, right? Our heroes have a minor spat to close out the book's last true chapter. I talk about some lame programming language that nobody cares about. Discussion questions end a somewhat sad episode!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!