Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 23


I quickly read through chapter 23 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month. Our heroes run through the woods to avoid some not-so-observant guards. Margaux finds some urban planning unsettling, leading to a discovery. I discuss the many ways to gently wake someone up using airborne cooking vessels. Discussion questions end a surprisingly uneventful episode.



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 19.67MB - Duration: 34:49 m (79 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!