Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 21


I read chapter 21 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month. Our heroes wake up while camping after somehow not being attacked by bears because they left all their dirty dishes strewn about their campsite. Margaux theorizes that some flags on the side of the road are for finding fugitives rather than for marking some underground infrastructure because a responsible individual called 811 before they dug. Jeff discusses slacking at work, leading to a crisis involving CRT monitors. Discussion questions end another exciting episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 17.11MB - Duration: 29:46 m (80 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!