Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 18


I stumble through chapter 18 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month. Henry "gets ready" for a date night without taking a shower, presumably. Margaux blows her chance at a romantic night by siding with her employer. I wonder how "footsie" ever became a thing. Discussion questions close out a relationship-heavy episode free of any magical confrontations!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!