Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 15


I read through chapter 15 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month. Our heroes run into trouble as they flee from Jackpond, though they do seem to have plenty of candy. Margaux calls shotgun even though they have a new traveling companion. Henry gets into a very confusing and poorly described fight. I rant about all the germs I'll be inhaling after I'm done recording. Discussion questions end our exciting episode.



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 22.21MB - Duration: 40:53 m (76 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!