Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 13


I read through an almost painfully long chapter 13 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month. Our heroes sneak into a fortress through the service entrance, which is surprisingly dull. Margaux searches for paperwork with the help of a magical creature, which is surprisingly dull. Henry files a records request, which is surprisingly dull. I suffer through somewhere around eight drinking breaks while trying to get through this chapter, which is surprisingly dull. There are discussion questions.



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!