Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 12


I eventually read all of chapter 12 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month. Margaux clearly has a new suitor who might be less than half her age, though its all a little foggy and we don't know what kind of norms they have in her world. Henry complains about his bottom. I make it clear that there will not be a sequel, though I feel like I've said that before. Discussion questions and a plea for feedback end another exciting, magic-free episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 18.33MB - Duration: 34:46 m (74 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!