Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 9


I read through chapter 9 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month. Margaux attends two meetings in a single chapter, which might be a new record for this book series! Henry sleeps off a night of drinking and fighting before completely misinterpreting Margaux's intentions. I procrastinate in editing and releasing this chapter for a solid week, but I promise to be better! Discussion questions close out an underwhelming, dull chapter!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!