Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 5


I read through a surprisingly dull chapter 5 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month. Margaux secures a ride back to Sandhill, which is super boring but possibly the only interesting part of this chapter. Henry continues to whine about broken ribs and whatnot. I provide a tasty recipe for baked chicken. Discussion question are provided if you can stick it out until the end of this episode.



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 14.24MB - Duration: 26:20 m (76 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!