Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 4


I ramble through a long chapter 4 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux is unhappy with the view from her hotel room.  Henry gets accosted while trying to submit a government form, albeit a falsified one.  Margaux storms off into the woods when Henry expresses dismay at possibly breaking more ribs.  I discuss building codes and express my love for Chili's ribs.  Discussion questions follow our longest chapter yet!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 25.4MB - Duration: 47:39 m (75 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!