Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Powerless Chapter 2


I rush through chapter 2 of Powerless, a book I wrote in a month.  Henry successfully outsmarts a random guard who can't get enough nuts.  Margaux scowls at tax forms like every single person in the world would.  Our heroes escape to an inn with a suprisingly good name considering the quality of my writing where Henry tries to get drunk out of despair.  Discussion questions end another magic-free episode.



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 18.09MB - Duration: 32:58 m (77 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!