Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 45


I get hungry while reading chapter 45 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Henry loads up a plate of food at what should be a polite buffet situation.  Tedward expresses some interest in Astrid despite the two meeting just recently and both being filthy from imprisonment.  I whine about how far behind I am in National Novel Writing Month and drink some truly bad wine.  Discussion questions, which are already obsolete because the next episode is already recorded, end this exciting chapter!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 15.48MB - Duration: 28:19 m (76 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!