Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 44


I read through chapter 44 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes and a substantial cast of supporting characters share a carriage ride where they babble for the entire chapter.  Leonid explains why his father isn't in the carriage. Our heroes imply that there is a sequel coming that involves continuing this terrible story line.  Jeff explains how fraternity retreats work, including how to use fire extinguishers.  Discussion questions end another dull episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 12.91MB - Duration: 23:58 m (75 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!