Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 41


I read through chapter 41 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Henry attacks some recently escaped, innocent prisoners that might have wanted revenge but may have listened to reason if he hadn't just pummeled them suddenly.  Margaux realizes her father is still pretentious.  I encourage people to send incriminating stories and complain about buzzing.  Discussion questions and the first feedback in months end our exciting episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 14.71MB - Duration: 26:51 m (77 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!