Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 39


I fly through a longish chapter 39 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes discuss ways to escape that, honestly, stink.  What should be an exciting chapter is actually a pile of childish dialogue written by someone who might be the worst author ever.  Astrid gets outside finally so that she can stop whining.  I brag that I'm pretty good at one-legged hopping.  Discussion questions end a relatively dull episode!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!