Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 38


I eventually read chapter 38 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Astrid is injured by a blast from six chapters back, but Henry dispataches him without any real trouble.  Margaux starts acting mean and unsympathetic towards the only other woman in their party for reasons of jealousy perhaps?  As a creative type, I critique big-budget Hollywood fantasy films that are clearly based on better material than this podcast is.  Discussion questions end our episode!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!