Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 27


I quickly read chapter 27 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux calms a horse and goes looking for a self-satisfied alchemist.  Benbo tries to calm the horses in a ravine that doesn't seem to make sense considering where the horses and carriage were in previous chapters, but I'm sure nobody really cares about that.  I try to keep it under ten minutes in an attempt to squeeze in two recordings this week.  Surprisingly, two discussion questions close out this episode.



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 5.42MB - Duration: 9:44 m (78 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!