Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 25


I drink my way through chapter 25 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux nearly breaks down after Henry goes missing, but I posit that she's actually just furious.  Leonid plans a big explosion.  Benbo likely runs over some unconcious people with a carriage that now miraculously fits down a road that was previously too narrow, but who's really paying attention to this terrible writing anyway?  Discussion questions end our short episode that leaves me with a substantial glass of bourbon remaining.



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!