Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 24


I slowly make my way through chapter 24 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Henry finds himself in a dome that should contain a carnival ride, apparently.  A cocky mage threatens our hero without understanding that the author of this awful book has gifted him with seemingly unlimited powers.  I sound rather grumpy the entire episode and try to light up some previously burned bridges one more time.  Somehow this short chapter ends in discussion questions!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!