Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 23


I struggle through the short chapter 23 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux scolds Henry, which excites him in exactly the creepy way you might be expecting.  Leonid throws a smoke bomb that we can only guess will have long-term medical consequences for those effected.  I bitch about General Electric and their shoddy appliance division while lamenting my inability to reheat food.  Discussion question end a very short chapter!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!