Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 21


I take numerous breaks while I read chapter 21 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes spend an exciting episode talking in a carriage!  Leonid reveals that Margaux's mom might be sleeping around.  Margaux is appalled, as are the listeners, by Henry's naivete.  The plot thickens as they head to an abandoned mine!  Discussion questions close out a magic-free episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 15.53MB - Duration: 27:22 m (79 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!