Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 18


I quickly narrate through a magic-free chapter of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Our merry band gets dropped off at a breakfast-themed pub while their driver goes to find a parking garage.  Leonid manages to cheer up Margaux by pointing out that Henry is basically a puppy.  Jeff comments that portions of this chapter read like an encyclopedia entry, only far less descriptive and substantially duller.  Discussion questions end a so-so entry in this story.



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 14.42MB - Duration: 25:46 m (78 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!