Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 16


I eventually read through a suprisingly long chapter 16 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes stop at a bookstore in the early morning, though Margaux just sticks with magazines as reading material for the remainder of the chapter.  Henry uses an old trick to thwart a whole bunch of bad guys, which irritates me because a good author would have come up with something new, but, no, we're just going to be lazy and do the same old thing.  Leonid literally does nothing useful.  I badmouth a local brewery.  Discussion questions close a long, exciting episode!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!