Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 14


I read aloud a moderately interesting chapter 14 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux and Leonid snap at some underlings, followed by Margaux being mean to Henry for no particular reason.  Henry accuses his host whose fence he destroyed with a beautiful "mapple" tree of being a bad guy in our plot.  I wonder if Jared Kushner gets an allowance.  Discussion questions close out a quick episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 15.65MB - Duration: 28:04 m (78 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!