Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 10


I read a completely uneditted chapter 10 from Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux's father disappears, and Margaux doesn't seem all that bothered.  Leonid falls apart in the face of adversity despite looking like Dracula.  Henry tires himself out running upstairs.  I make a promise to release this episode earlier, which clearly didn't happen since it is Friday afternoon.  Discussion questions close out a fun episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 21.03MB - Duration: 39:34 m (74 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!