Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 5


I sometimes stay on topic while reading chapter 5 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes meet a new, minor character who will most likely have little to no character development or role in our story.  Henry exhibits his unexplained fear of horses.  Erin shoves Margaux into a carriage to avoid an uncomfortable conversation.  I ask for suggestions for food for road trips.  Discussion questions close out another magic-free episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 14.82MB - Duration: 40:42 m (51 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!