Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 2


I breeze through chapter 2 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux buys breakfast, scares a child, and gets muddy.  Henry becomes concussed after waking up in a horse-drawn carriage.  Margaux becomes enraged that Henry doesn't understand her family history even though they've probably been together for a few years at this point, which makes one wonder if he even listens to her at all when she talks about her childhood that clearly left her with baggage and trust issues in her adult life, especially when faced with possibly seeing her family again in the near future.  I wonder if perhaps I delve into nostalgic but boring stories a bit too much.  Some exceptionally weak discussion questions end this boring episode!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!