Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Preface and Chapter 1


I ramble through a preface and chapter 1 of our new story, Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Some random, ethnically diverse people author an officious letter.  Margaux threatens physical harm to a king using rolled-up paper.  Henry defuses a volatile situation after a long day of fighting groundhogs.  Jeff babbles about computer games on floppy diskettes and makes outrageous claims about this book being better than Offworlder.  Relatively weak discussion questions close out our first episode with the sequel to Bringing Balance!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 17.24MB - Duration: 47:34 m (51 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!