Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 21


I drink some exceptional whiskey as I read chapter 21 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Henry is surprised there aren't more people in his magical bedroom.  Margaux finds a mysterious hair on a countertop.  Henry ruins a tavern that hopefully bought some commercial insurance.  I apologize for my constant asides in this typo-riddled chapter.  Some subpar discussion questions close out a moderately exciting episode.



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!