Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 20


I become baffled multiple times as I read chapter 20 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes find themselves claiming space in a well-decorated barn.  Henry suprises readers with his shocking unfamiliarity with magic.  I rant about not having tents in this story before expressing my deep dislike for one of our heroes.  Discussion questions close out a surprisingly dull chapter.



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!