Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 19


I invite two friends to read chapter 19 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Henry tries to pull an apple from a very private place.  Margaux surprises a cartload of unnamed mages by magically appearing.  A mage who might possibly be the first minority in this book makes an appearance.  Glenn and Justin join me in my disappointment in the lack of plot and awkward, meaningless dialog.  After enjoying some of Matthew McConaughey's whiskey, we delve into important matters with our discussion questions!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!