Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 17


I zip through chapter 17 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux initially misunderstands a homophone that really isn't funny.  Henry asks for background information that leads to an entire chapter of dull, insufficient explanations.  I wonder if creating a female character who likes shoes was sexist.  Discussion questions close out a magic-free chapter!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!