Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 15


I berate my laptop as I attempt to read chapter 15 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Henry binges on biscuits before attending a mercifully short staff meeting.  Margaux hides against a door after a not-so-shocking realization.  I groan at this childish love story repeatedly and wonder how I usually pronounce "Devon."  Discussion questions are included!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 18.89MB - Duration: 54:05 m (49 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!