Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 12


I struggle through all thirteen pages of Chapter 12 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux and Henry manage to trap a mountain lion using some sort of obfuscated magic scheme that doesn't really make any sense.  Our heroes show mercy to a sickly animal that remains unnamed and never appears again in the story.  I imply that this series of books might be a great purchase if you're attending a book burning.  Discussion questions wrap up a relatively long episode that thankfully includes magic!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!