Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 10


I apologize profusely for this boring story as I read chapter 10 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes enjoy three meals, one implied meal, and one implied staff meeting.  Henry reveals a secret that everyone listening already knew.  Margaux expresses fear of her siblings.  I wonder who is ordering pork chops at restaurants.  Discussion questions close out a magic-free episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 20.79MB - Duration: 45:46 m (64 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!