Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 5


In a slightly late episode, I read through possibly the dullest chapter yet of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux opts for the hot breakfast like a normal person would.  Henry gets a bit creepy trying to eye his crush.  Someone's eggs get ruined.  I rant a bit more about Amazon and marvel at how terrible this book really is.  Discussion questions round out what might possibly be the episode that causes everyone to unsubscribe!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 19.08MB - Duration: 40:03 m (67 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!