Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 4


I interrupt myself continuously as I read chapter 4 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Henry shows off skills while moving a stone.  A whole bunch of named, minor characters show up fro magic fighting.  Jeff spends ages reading feedback from two listeners and rants about "bro" culture.  Discussion questions close out another relatively uneventful chapter!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 18.86MB - Duration: 38:53 m (68 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!