Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 2


I complain about having to once again read the eBook version of Chapter 2 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Our two heroes (thus far) attend a staff meeting with a whiskey-induced buzz.  Henry rudely stares at someone across a room who we don't actually get to meet.  Joe continues to be annoyingly awkward.  Discussion questions seek to deepen our understanding of this hastily written work as we end our episode.



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 17.51MB - Duration: 36:11 m (68 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!