Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Chapter 17


I giggle my way through chapter 17 of Bringing Balance, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes find themselves using an exciting stairwell before battling the evil forces of the Magistrates.  Stephen displays extensive knowledge of a palace in some terribly tiresome foreshadowing.  I sip exceptionally strong whiskey and rattle off some discussion questions before closing out the chapter with some obviously incorrect arithmetic.



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!