Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Chapter 16


I read through a somewhat repetitive, though entertaining, chapter of Bringing Balance, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux impresses characters and readers alike with her magic.  Henry explodes a temple wall with extreme discretion.  I yell at people who stop to read maps at amusement parks and lament the cost of my microphone.  The episode ends with the usual thought-provoking discussion questions!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 17.66MB - Duration: 38:10 m (65 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!