Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Chapter 13


Frederick, everyone's favorite villain, makes another appearance as I read Chapter 13 of Bringing Balance, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux helps a clearly exhausted Henry to a new and poorly named character's house.  Our two favorite mages make everyone uncomfortable with their advances.  Erin and Stephen enjoy a breakfast that was magically prepared.  Discussion questions end the episode, one of which concerns condiments!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 23.78MB - Duration: 53:12 m (62 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!