Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Chapter 12


I surprise myself with the appearance of a recurring character as I read Chapter 12 of Bringing Balance, a book I wrote in a month.  Erin, Henry, and hunky Stephen attempt a daring rescue of Margaux, resulting in flirting and a public display of affection.  Jeff notes a major issue with his writing style during his lunch hour.  Discussion questions close out another exciting episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 25.76MB - Duration: 57:52 m (62 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!