Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Chapter 10


I enjoy a delicious drink as I read through the longest chapter yet of Bringing Balance, a book I wrote in one month.  Our small group of main characters are ambushed after some "ample poultry."  The first mispelling of "waist" appears in the book at an inopportune moment.  I contribute far too much commentary to this chapter before we finish with discussion questions!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!