Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Chapter 4


I start reading Chapter 4 of Bringing Balance where we meet Margaux, a new main character in this story of questionable value.  Most of the chapter takes place in the Surly Swine, an inn and tavern that serves stew and, apparently, alcohol to whomever.  Margaux gets angry and I get frustrated in this latest episode.  Discussion questions are included as always!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 12.02MB - Duration: 31:13 m (54 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!