Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 37


I navigate, like a maze of poorly described hallways, chapter 37 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux runs towards danger despite her father's condescending tone.  Our heroes kiss far too long as Margaux pushes Henry up against a wall even though her father and a complete stranger are watching this scene play out, probably looking away embarassed.  There are guards and enemies, but they turn out to be useless filler in this chapter.  I record and edit on time, but forget to release this episode until this week!  Discussion questions end an exciting installment!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 14.6MB - Duration: 25:31 m (80 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!