Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 33


I jump right into chapter 33 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux and Leonid release some questionable prinsoners from captivity in a poorly-run dungeon complex.  Leonid steals a kiss in what I would guess is a way to inject some uncertainty into Margaux's affection for Henry. I long for Hostess Donettes as if they are no longer manufactured during the pandemic, when, in reality, I just don't need to eat 6000 calories of baked goods coated in sugar.  Discussion questions close out a surprisingly boring episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 13.29MB - Duration: 22:46 m (82 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!