Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 31


I quickly zip right through chapter 31 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Leonid melts through a lock and makes us wonder why he doesn't just rob banks for a living.  Margaux casts a simple spell but really doesn't do much of anything else.  Our heroes dupe a guard in a very dull manner.  I explain how I keep getting reality confused with a Stephen King novel.  Discussion questions end our slightly boring episode!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!