Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 13


I get a bit disgusted with chapter 13 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux escapes through a window like she's in a coming-of-age rom-com.  Henry navigates the streets of an unfamiliar city until he finds beer.  Our heroes get frisky in a more-than-implied description in the morning before returning for lunch.  I talk up my favorite beer and wonder if people in other countries also enjoy "mapple syrup." Discussion questions, including one about trees, end our fun episode.



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 19.58MB - Duration: 35:16 m (78 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!